Write Write Write: Thesis and Dissertation
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Need to write? Set a deadline! Deadlines
are a fantastic motivator. If I didn’t have a deadline,
this newsletter might never be distributed! It’s
the deadline that drives me: I know that by the second Monday
of each month, I must have a completed article about
a topic my readers will find useful and insightful.
I suggest using deadlines to complete all of
your writing, including the chapters of your dissertation. Those
of you who are using our TADA-CD™ are already familiar with
this foundational strategy … for example, using a conference
submissions deadline as a motivator to get one of your chapters
finished.
It’s also important to set a continuum
of deadlines. After clearing a major hurdle – such
as defending a thesis proposal – many students want to take
a break from writing. If you find that you need a break after
the completion of a major task, by all means take one – but
only after setting a date for when you plan to begin writing again,
as well as a deadline for when your next task must be completed.
Following are some additional TADA tips
to help ensure that your writing gets done (and done well)!
Capture Ideas with a Journal
Keeping a journal is an age-old technique that
writers have used to get their thoughts down on paper and keep
track of what they learn. Many writers use a journal to
write down facts, brainstorm ideas or “free write” a
stream of consciousness to get their creative juices flowing. Others
use it to vent their frustrations, which can help them move past
the emotions of writer's block.
Though you might resist this strategy
because you consider it extra work, I highly recommend using our
TADA Journal. You can use our Methods journal to write down
random thoughts and ideas whenever they strike; it can also serve
as a central depository for data that can be mined in the future. There
is also a “Issues to be Resolved” section, and a half
page of graphing paper to create hand drawings of the elaborate
tables and graphs you plan to include in your thesis/dissertation. You
can run these “rough” drafts by your advisor for approval
before investing a lot of time mapping the final versions.
Keep Keywords or Phrases Handy
Let’s face it, not too many people will read a masters thesis
or doctoral dissertation. A thesis or dissertation is not the type
of document that piques the general public’s interest mainly
because of its academic rigor and writing style. The topic is generally
of interest only to the student, experts in the field, the student’s
advisor and committee members.
Academic writing is quite formal and is
not designed to be entertaining. Remember that the most important
goal in writing is to get your intelligent point across in a clear
concise manner. This style of writing is structured, formal and
objective. A wide range of vocabulary is of course important, however,
when writing academic papers, it is often helpful to find key terms
that are familiar to your reading audience. Focusing on scholarly
text will also ultimately assist you in the writing process. Use
academic journals to prepare a list of key words that are important
in your research area---use this set of key words repeatedly throughout
your document. Resist the urge to use your thesaurus to come up
alternate synonyms to substitute for key terms; these words all
have different meanings, nuances, and connotations. For example,
if the key phrase for your discipline is "family structure", ---do
not try substituting other phrases like "family composition", "family
formation", "family arrangement", or "family size." Experimenting
with alternative word choice can do more harm than good. On the
other hand, purposely repeating key words and phrases links sentences
and paragraphs. Moreover, repetition of key words and phrases not
only emphasizes important points but also adds cohesion to your
overall argument by creating powerful links between ideas in your
paper and helping your reader understand the logic of your paper.
Organize Your Thoughts
At some point you’ll need to stop garnering
ideas and facts, and start to write. First, however, it’s
important to organize your project. Out of the mountains
of raw data you have accumulated, you’ll need to decide
what material to include, how to sequence that material, and
how to shape your document to achieve the strongest possible
argument and impression.
One of the most productive approaches
to organizing your thesis or dissertation is to begin with your
proposal and a well crafted table of contents (TOC). Your
thesis or dissertation is really just an extension of your proposal;
as such, a good starting point is to go through your proposal and
simply change the tense from future to past. Then you can
craft and use a TOC to create headers and sub-headers for the entire
document.
This exercise will help you to organize
your ideas effectively, and might also point out areas where you
may need to collect more information. Be sure to involve your advisor
in this process, and take careful note of the feedback he or she
provides.
Editing Your Work
It is difficult for any writer to critique and
proofread his or her own work. For the best result, take
a “top-down” approach, and begin by reviewing the
general organization and content of your writing. Don’t
worry about sentence-level editing at this stage. Instead,
focus on the flow of your paragraphs and sections, and whether
they are properly ordered to facilitate a smooth stream of thought. One
way to gauge this is to write down all of your topic sentences
in the order in which they appear in the document. (You
can accomplish this quickly and easily by using the “blocking” function
of your word processor to copy them to a blank page.) Once
the sentences are listed in this fashion, you can easily observe
whether they flow logically and make any necessary changes.
Additional tips for effective self-editing are to:
- Only edit for short blocks of time;
- Edit in a quiet place to avoid distractions;
- Read your document out loud;
- Read your document backwards, reading the last page first and
working your way back to the first page;
- Changing something about your document (e.g., paper color,
font size, font color or spacing) to give it a fresh look.
Finding an Editor
Each time I begin writing this newsletter, I am
comforted by the fact that I have an editor who will review my
work. Knowing this allows me to freely pour out my thoughts
on paper without having to simultaneously worry about the details
of style and proper mechanics.
While I highly recommend using a third
party to edit your work, it’s important to find the right person. Your
thesis or dissertation will be written for a highly intellectual
community, many of whom are experts in your field. As such,
the editor you choose must be practiced in an academic style of
writing that will appeal to this audience.
Evaluate potential editors by having them
edit a few pages of your work to get a feel for their style. It’s
helpful to provide samples of journal articles in your field, and
to advise the editor of your style requirements and expectations. Some
editors only edit for grammar and specific MLA or APA formatting
issues. Others edit for overall continuity, and will check
to ensure that the paragraphs are in the proper sequential order,
and whether a particular argument makes sense. Editing fees
range from $20 to $150 an hour. Be sure to clarify issues
such as how many words or pages an editor can complete in an hour’s
time. For more useful information about finding an editor,
visit www.academicword.com.
Overcoming Writer’s Anxiety:
Write with a Clean Slate
I got high marks in all of my college preparatory
English classes, but hit a sticking point in my freshman year
of college, when a visiting instructor told me that my writing
skills were lacking. I was devastated by her negative assessment,
and my confidence in my writing waned.
The following semester, I finished my
freshman writing sequence at another university. Despite
the fact that I wrote my essays on the bus rides to and from class,
I was able to achieve straight A’s. Still, my confidence
in my writing remained shaken.
If you have suffered a similar negative
experience, it is important to understand that time and continued
practice will heal this wound. Writing is like everything
else: the more you practice, the better you get. It is important
to move past any confidence issues you have by just writing and
writing more. Another good way to build confidence
is to share your writing with trusted confidantes who will appraise,
constructively criticize and help edit your words.
Writing with an Attitude of
Confidence
Many of us experience writer’s block because
we are worried about whether or not what we are writing is actually
right. I suggest that you abandon “right” and “wrong” and
just write with abandon! Write as if you know you
are right, and worry about the details later.
Writing with recklessness allows you to
clear your head and move ahead of whatever may be blocking your
thoughts. I used this technique to write the summary chapter
of my dissertation. I had been struggling with the document
for months, and finally said to myself, “I know more about
this dissertation than anyone else, so I’m going to act like
it!.” I began writing as if what I had to say was important,
and as if my findings were an important academic contribution to
the field. My new attitude was absolutely freeing! I
was able to quickly finish the last chapter and rewrite the first
one, as well!
Find a “Coach”
I strongly advise students to find a “coach” to
help them organize and complete their project. There is
a considerable difference between an advisor and a thesis or
dissertation coach. An advisor is, first and foremost, an academician
with considerable responsibilities that do not involve you. A
thesis or dissertation coach, on the other hand, is paid to focus
on you and help you finish your degree by listening to all of
your concerns … academic or otherwise.
Thesis/dissertation coaches focus on a
holistic – not strictly academic -- approach to finishing
your degree. In person or on the phone, they can discuss
your project on an individual basis in absolute confidence, and
also serve as a sounding board for stress relief. They can offer
both emotional and academic support to help you complete important
tasks, as well as provide the tools you need to achieve your goals,
which enable you to accomplish more with less effort.
Coaches can help you get organized, and
regularly track your progress to ensure that you stay on top of
tasks. Their goal is to work in every possible way to help you
write your thesis/dissertation, finish it, and get it published.
“Group Coaching” is also valuable. Through this
model, once coach provides counsel to several students over the
phone (via a bridge line). Everyone involved agrees to confidentiality,
and the group is configured to guarantee that no one in the group
will be in competition with another. The advantage of this approach
is that you can accomplish more in less time, and can have the
opportunity to work with students in different disciplines from
all over the world. The group setting also provides built-in
peer support.
For more useful information about this
and other critical subjects, visit www.academicladder.com.
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Question of the Month:
Q:
I am an African American doctoral student
I have returned to school after a long career as a Chemist to pursue
a Ph.D. degree in science education.
I am finding that the African American
students at my school (including me) are having a very difficult
time graduating in a reasonable length of time. In a 6-7 year period
or longer, no full-time doctoral students have graduated from my
area. I am trying to set up mechanisms for school administrators
to 1) recognize that the education students are having a problem,
and 2) that we need help/support if the school wants to see more
African American graduate.
Currently, advisors are comfortable saying
and accepting that "Blacks are not capable of graduating from a
Ph.D. program. When a Black drops out, they say, "see I told you
so, that's what they all do, drop out." Therefore, they do not
have to do anything because they see the problem as being with
us, not them.
A:
Thank you for contacting me. There are a number of issues
that you have describe below that are common to all PhD students...and
also black graduate students as well.
The Survey of Earned Doctorate has repeatedly shown that
the field of Education shows the longest Time to Degree (TTD)
for ALL students. In addition, the median age in this discipline
is also higher than in any other field. Women and minorities
also flock to this field as well instead of science and engineering.
I give you all of that information to let you know that what
is going on in Education across the country as well as at
your university.
To that end, I can suggest a number of things to help you
and your friends move through the process:
1. Dealing with racial discrimination can be exhausting
and quite energy draining. I suggest that you and your
friends begin by reading my July 2005 issue of TADA FinishLine
newsletter: Evening
The Odds Issues Facing Women, International Students And
Minorities.
2. I would also suggest that you and your friends sign
up for our
FREE monthly newsletter that provides some tips, tools,
and techniques to help students through graduate school.
The next newsletter goes out on Monday, 2-13-06 if you
don't sign up before Monday you won't get a newsletter
until March.
3. I am headed to Boston to give 2 workshops at MIT and
at BC...My workshop is called "TADA Thesis and Dissertation
Accomplished: Practical Steps to Completing a Master's
Thesis or Dissertation."
You might consider having your administrator on campus
bring me to campus to do a workshop there. Often universities
have special funds to bring speakers to campus. If you
have a Black Graduate Student Organization you might consider
doing a joint venture with the graduate school to bring
a series of speakers to campus to inspire and motivate
yourselves to complete the degree.
4. I will ask around about mentors specifically for education...because
I know what you mean about having mentors for science & Engineering,
and also business majors etc. I hope my answer has given
you a starting place on what to do next. I will get back
to you on another occasion.
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Ph.D. Doctoral Students…
• TA-DA
gave me the incentive to "get the lead out" and finish. The 12
minutes a day has lead to approximately two to three hours. I
have really got a lot done, just knowing that the twelve minutes
does wonders for the psyche.
Maryjane, Fayetteville, NC
• The
commitment to a deadline and to working 12 minutes a day actually
reduces stress. I can always do 12 minutes--even if I'm tired,
sick, uninspired or grumpy. Facing a deadline makes it feel like
I will actually get done!
"I have to do my 12 minutes" we say in our house these days. I've
been progressing steadily on my dissertation by committing to 12
minutes, and my husband has covered huge amounts of material for
an upcoming professional exam. My friend has committed to completing
the annulment papers she has procrastinated on for 10 years, and
my father-in-law has started studying Spanish 12 minutes a day.
Thanks!
Christine, Seattle, WA
• It helped
me to set goals for my chapters and give me some practical strategies
for finishing. Also I believe it's good to list your finish date.
It gives you something to strive for rather than letting the
thesis become nebulous.
Martha; Albany, CA
• TA-DA
explains the dissertation process and lifts the curtain to a
process that seems impossible to accomplish. It provides strategy
for selecting the committee and provides timelines that enable
accomplishment of the dissertation within a specific time frame.
Randall; USMC Jacksonville, NC
• The program
helped me to understand the dissertation concept much better.
I am a visual individual; the tutorial was a great help.
Deborah; U.S. Army
• Provides
helpful suggestions for how to proceed as well as suggesting
disciplined and reasonable timelines for completion.
Lawrence; Philadelphia, PA
Master’s Thesis Students…
• It has
helped with the fact that my graduate school does not have a
formal format for the proposal. The Journal has helped a lot.
Talia; Naranjito, Puerto Rico
• This
is a great tool for those who will be starting either their Master's
Degree or Dissertation. I highly recommend it.
Teresa; Naguabo, Puerto Rico
• Requesting
that I set a goal date for finishing, kept me focused and it
was the first step in accomplishing the task. Also, I kept remembering
the words; a good thesis is a done thesis.
Gladys; NY, NY
• It guided
me to a fair start. Gracias!
Jess; San Francisco, CA
Sincerely,
Wendy Y. Carter, Ph.D.
email: drcarter@tadafinallyfinished.com
www.tadafinallyfinished.com
About the Author: As a single mother, professor
Wendy Y. Carter, Ph.D., completed three masters' degrees and a
PhD. Her motto is a Good Thesis/Dissertation is a Done Thesis/Dissertation.
She is the creator of a new innovative interactive resource tool
on CD—TADA! Thesis and Accomplished. To learn more and sign
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